My Greatest Fear Poem by fathima wasti

My Greatest Fear

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my greatest fear is to fail,
through this life as i sail.
i want my ship to flow through life,
to achieve what i want to strife.
but life is much tougher than it seems,
you never fulfill all your dreams.
sometimes you will fall and stumble,
because there is no end to struggle.
you struggle and you cry,
then you get back for another try.
cause the best part is when you give a fight,
and bring life back with all your might.
your life will flow like the notes of a song,
little high little low and sometimes long.
my greatest fear is to fail,
but my fears is what makes me dare.
to do what i fear, fail or succeed,
both happiness and sorrow my life learns to greet.
cause life is what you will make,
cause god doesn't give what you cant take

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 26 August 2008

Failure is an end...only if one..allow it to be! It is best viewed...as a positive learning experience. Best wishes..

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C. P. Sharma 07 August 2008

Excelsior....you have great wisom and poetic talent event at so young an age. Ihave become your fan at the reading of your first poem, you write like me. Keep it up.

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