Memories Poem by fathima wasti

Memories

Rating: 4.3


when i look back memories i find,
they all just rush back to fill my mind.
some are good while some are bad,
some bring happiness some are sad.
friends and foes both left marks,
some left a glow some just sparks.
some bring a smile on my face,
some seem to vanish without a trace.
some of them will never be forgotten,
some are fresh while some are rotten.
now new memories replace the old,
these too include some warm some cold.
yet this what life should be,
sometime sad sometimes happy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 22 August 2008

I cannot recommend this piece because there is little in it that is unique or of particular revelation to anyone. Frankly, there just is not enough here to warrant it. There is nothing outstanding in the writing either. GW62

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