Thursday, October 23, 2008

My Hope Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just a couple of words that i wanna say
Nothing special, even asking if you're okay
That's all i'm asking for everytime i pray
Before everything's gone and before i go away
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Good write. Many relationships have lost their intimacy and the partners simply exist together instead of really living. This poem speaks to such individuals.9/10

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