Wednesday, February 24, 2016

My Knight And I Comments

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I've come to the end of my rainbow:
What's waiting there for me?
A knight in polished armor,
who rides upon the sea.
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Jan Jarnigan
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Khairul Ahsan 24 March 2016

I just came across this beautiful poem of yours and I liked it so much! It left some beautiful feelings in me. Happiness and contentment are hard to find these days, but your poem induces these feelings in the readers' mind. Thank you very much for sharing your lovely feelings, well done, dear poet! 'The rainbow's end for us, you see, is beginning of joy and bliss, for my knight and his lady, me~~ unite our hearts and kiss.' - a beautiful ending to a lovely poem. Really nice!

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