Monday, October 27, 2008

My Life Comments

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when i was born,
i don't know,
what will happen in my life.
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yunni scholsatica
mom
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C. P. Sharma 08 July 2009

A great poem, a great tribute to life and mother in so simple words. It would add to its beauty if you take a little care of English grammer. CP.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 October 2008

nice tribute to mother respect and affection rich...good piece, Yunni 10

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