My Life Poem by Dead Ducky

My Life



My life is like a sunset,
Where the sun hits,
It's beautiful.
But where the sun can't reach,
It's dark,
And hard to see.
When you're with me,
You're like my sun,
But when you leave,
There is no light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 04 January 2009

I love the contrast between your life and the sun... very cool. good job. Becca

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