Thursday, July 22, 2010

My Life Comments

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I walked a path of the darkest light
but here I am, I have learnt to fight
although my blurry vision, sometimes
I am out of sight
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Nicole Buckland
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Chris Jibero 22 July 2010

Good poem.I like its rhythm and progression.You need to write ' purpose' properly.You may as well read my ' Forever' All the best.

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