My Life Poem by Mehakdeep Singh

My Life

Rating: 5.0


Life is now fugly,
the dream gonna foggy.
gone somewhere and lost, that jolly,
and feel myself logy.

Amazing were the days,
more stunning, the nights
when I talked with my dreams
and now, lost my that delights.

No assistance, unedged,
don't know where I going.
life seems to be ceased
on the way, while moving..

I was, when, with best friends,
only joviality there, never worried.
life had good sounds,
always smiled, never cried.


Today time stressed me,
leaving no reason to live.
but, known by whom, what tomorrow I will be?
such hope, enough to thrive

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
poem about my life when I left friends for sake of my dream..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R. Lee Metheny 02 August 2017

I was snagged by that perfect first line: Life is now fugly. The poem, itself, is obviously personal, yet universal in its content. Thumbs up!

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Rajnish Manga 01 August 2017

Welcome to PH, Dear Poet. You have nicely portrayed the chapter of your life which is otherwise very very important as you enter into a new phase, though, the loss of friends will be felt badly. Thanks. life seems to be ceased / on the way, while moving.. I was, when, with best friends.... Today.... leaving no reason to live.

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Mehakdeep Singh 01 August 2017

Thanks

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