Tuesday, August 1, 2017

My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is now fugly,
the dream gonna foggy.
gone somewhere and lost, that jolly,
and feel myself logy.
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Mehakdeep Singh
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R. Lee Metheny 02 August 2017

I was snagged by that perfect first line: Life is now fugly. The poem, itself, is obviously personal, yet universal in its content. Thumbs up!

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Rajnish Manga 01 August 2017

Welcome to PH, Dear Poet. You have nicely portrayed the chapter of your life which is otherwise very very important as you enter into a new phase, though, the loss of friends will be felt badly. Thanks. life seems to be ceased / on the way, while moving.. I was, when, with best friends.... Today.... leaving no reason to live.

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Mehakdeep Singh 01 August 2017

Thanks

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