My Life Poem by Dave Eadelis

My Life

Rating: 5.0


My life use to be aglow
These days, I just don't know

I want joy back in my life
But every step, cuts like a knife

All my thoughts, bring a tear
Darkness is ever so near

Love & happiness, seam so far away
It grows more distant every day

Life has drained out of me like a sive
I have so much more to give

Friday, June 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 June 2018

Sad introspection in verse with rhythmic splendour. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing.

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Robert Murray Smith 01 June 2018

Correct two spelling errors.

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