Friday, June 1, 2018

My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life use to be aglow
These days, I just don't know

I want joy back in my life
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Dave Eadelis
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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2018

Sad introspection in verse with rhythmic splendour. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing.

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Robert Murray Smith 01 June 2018

Correct two spelling errors.

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