My Life So Far Poem by Justin Fitzpatrick

My Life So Far

Rating: 4.5


If you think that I will perish
With nothing more than tears
If you think that I only hope
Since I hide within my fears

If you think that I will cower
To the words that you say
If you think that I will not rise
To the chorus of the next day

If you think I am only emotional
Because I love poetic verse
If you think I am pathetic
Because I walk as though I am cursed

If you think that I cannot fight
At the weight I am
If you think I cannot stand
For I sit in silence again and again

If you question my heart
For it has not been seen
If you question my passion
For it appears I will not redeem

If I were to stop
Then you would win
I may not be much now
But I have hope to believe in

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Bob 20 January 2009

aww bless that realy nice with a exprience that alot of people well this is a good way to let out ur feelings

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Susan Jarvis 29 August 2008

This puts me in mind of Maya Angelou's 'Still I Rise'. An poignantly penned, heartfelt poem. S :)

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Hades Pandemonium 29 August 2008

A wonderfully written poem. Good use of metaphors: -)

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