My Love Poem by Lunar Aires

My Love

Rating: 4.3


She walks down the path
A new life in front of her
It's a new journey
The signs are a little blurred from time to time
When she wipes away the tears
She will see clearly
The clarity will be amazing
She will dance in a field of flowers and love
Acceptance will be given without question
Trust without regard
Love to last a lifetime
The beautiful woman she is
God spent a little extra time making
Deserving the best in life
A solid foundation
A steady rhythm
A hand that's not shaking

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Foley 08 August 2008

Enjoyable read. Nicely put. I liked this one (also) read it more than once to let it soak in.

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silver phoenix 31 July 2008

You can see the time spent on this, great work! Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two. If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3. Thankyou, Kilian

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