Sunday, July 3, 2011

My Love Comments

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neither as dark falling down ceding time,
nor the light showing the truthful lies.
element none alive can live this fact,
for am the one with the sourcing act.
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Arvind Ilamaran
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Chinedu Dike 14 January 2015

A brilliant train of thoughts well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a love poem. A lovely piece written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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