Tuesday, December 4, 2012

My Love Comments

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Our love is like a golden ring
Wrapped around our finger.
Our love is like a shining star
Bright our future.
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Asif Andalib 04 December 2012

Good write but there are a few typographical errors. The first stanza should be Our love is like a golden ring Wrapped around our finger. Our love is like a shining star Bright our future. and Love is though should be Love is tough

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