Melody Morningstar

Rookie (02/28/1989 / Seattle)

My Love Left Me Broken - Poem by Melody Morningstar

Standing on a wooden porch
Reaching with a child’s hand
Wishing with a lover’s heart

Tender as a new born lamb
Fragile as porcelain
Warm like loves embrace

My love you left me

Stranded on a deserted island
Lost in the woods
Crying like a babe

You left me

Dazed and confused
Shocked and amazed at

The fact you can know someone so well
Yet not at all

Now I am

Crying in my pillow
Raging like a storm
Hurting like a paper cut

Comments about My Love Left Me Broken by Melody Morningstar

  • (5/31/2006 12:57:00 AM)

    this poem isnt bad
    you should really try to expand on your material
    it will make you a more diverse writer
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  • (3/31/2006 9:18:00 PM)

    I liked this poem a lot! well done!

    ~~Elya Thorn~~
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 31, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 4, 2006

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