klaudia ortiz

Rookie (2/18/1993 / McAllen, TX)

My Mind Vs. My Heart - Poem by klaudia ortiz

While I sit here trying to make my mind think of what to write it says to me,
'Why would you want to write about HIM? '
And my heart replies,
'Because when I was with him I gave him my all, and when he left he took half of my heart. He made me want to be good, accomplish things I never thought I could. He made me want to do better things that I knew I could. He made me laugh when I was down. He picked me up when I fell down. And even though he got me mad, I accepted him just like that. Even though he wasn't near I could feel his presence around my heart. So now I write this to let him know that he has my heart no matter what.'


Comments about My Mind Vs. My Heart by klaudia ortiz

  • (4/13/2010 2:36:00 PM)

    Strong Words.. Lovely Poem (Report) Reply

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  • Sadiqullah Khan (1/25/2010 4:28:00 AM)

    good style of writing. I like it minus punctuation, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, March 1, 2010

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