My Mind Vs. My Heart Poem by klaudia ortiz

My Mind Vs. My Heart

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While I sit here trying to make my mind think of what to write it says to me,
'Why would you want to write about HIM? '
And my heart replies,
'Because when I was with him I gave him my all, and when he left he took half of my heart. He made me want to be good, accomplish things I never thought I could. He made me want to do better things that I knew I could. He made me laugh when I was down. He picked me up when I fell down. And even though he got me mad, I accepted him just like that. Even though he wasn't near I could feel his presence around my heart. So now I write this to let him know that he has my heart no matter what.'

1/25/2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jose Delosantos 13 April 2010

Strong Words.. Lovely Poem

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 January 2010

good style of writing. I like it minus punctuation,

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