My Mistake Poem by Ruben Gaytan

My Mistake



Mistake
I know i've made mistakes in the past
But i'm a better person know
I know the things I did to you weren't right
I hurt you really bad
When I cheated on you with anouther girl
You were always there by my side
When I needed you
You were there for me
Look how I repaid you
By hurting you when I didn't want to
When I saw that you were crying and upset
I felt so ashamed that I couldn't bring myself to ask you to forgive me
I'm hoping maybe one day
Just one of these days
You can forgive me
Please! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sana Rose 03 September 2009

I don't know how i shud comment on this poem...coz i empathize with her...I dont understand how you guys make this mistake...I myself have been the victim of two mistake of you guys...and the tears caused are so deep...I forgave them even if they didnt write to me, but bcoz of the faith that God is seeing all these...I feel you shouldnt have confessed it...She's goin to have a crush on you again if she hasnt found a new man... As this work took me to the past and made me feel some woe..it's a great work and has done its work as a poem.. Keep writing..

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Jan Fuentez 03 September 2009

admitting mistakes makes you man enough. but please don't do the same... realistic that is

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