My Moon And Stars Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

My Moon And Stars

Rating: 3.8


My Moon And Stars
My shining Sun
My only and only one
My heart and soul
My smiling lips
My only and only one
My eyes and ears
My breathing lungs
My only and only one
My ribs and arms
My running blood
My only and only one
My joy and tears
My revolting madness
My only and only one

This poem started by my bestfriend Muhsin Ali from bahrain and i complete it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameera Sameer 19 August 2009

i amaze your inspiration of writing posted 10++ and I do Believe that you can do much better through the years any ways your poem is..........Fabulous! ! ! nice work, keep it up =)

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Lady Grace 01 August 2009

you portray the sky and yourself..

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AND You say you aren't a poet? You could have fooled me.Very nice poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 August 2008

I enjoyed this verse.

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