Dream Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

Dream

Rating: 3.7


I had a dream, a dream of you
You and Me in far land
Alone
Land of dreams, full of trees
Green
Fragrant of rose and many other flowers
Red
Twitter of nightingale and many other birds
Yellow
Sweets of strawberry and many other fruits
Pink
Drizzle of waterfall and breeze at sunset
Silver
Clash of sea waves and crab hiding on the beach
Blue
Silence of the night and sounds of our heart beat
Black
Shine of the stars and light of complete moon
White
I had a dream, a dream of you
You and Me in far land
Alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Honest Heart 19 March 2009

this is incredible, beautiful work. just wow.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 March 2009

My 10 for this colorful dreamy composition.

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Honest Heart 22 March 2009

i love the natural flow to this, it's very easy to read. wonderful job!

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Deependra Kumar Jha 25 March 2009

I enjoyed reading your dream! keep dreaming, my friend! 10

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Eyan Desir 30 March 2009

HA, good write.............

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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

Wonderful descriptive poem about colors, thank you for sharing.................10

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Catrina Heart 11 August 2009

colorful dream..such a beautiful representation...........Thanks! ! ! 10+++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 August 2009

nice figures! A fine poem

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Shine of the stars and light of complete moon White I had a dream, a dream of you You and Me in far land Alone to feel good it is ok.. but good narration and lovely to read...10 all dreams mot come true.....mary to marry

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Obinna Eruchie 19 July 2009

An interesting dream. It is penned beautifully.

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