My Mother In All Her Gloom Poem by Payyton Egerstaffer

My Mother In All Her Gloom



I was asleep when I heard the strange noise
Getting up I went to look
I felt like I didn’t have much choice
But in my boots I shook

I came from my parent’s room
I knock soft
It was my mother in all her gloom
I knew I should have coughed

With one withering look
I knew I made a mistake
Because one step to far over the boundaries I took
For she couldn’t hide her ache

I wanted to comfort her
Let her know I was hurting too
But I knew she only wanted her sir
So I waited till she went to bed after she drank away her blues

And I snuck into her room
To whisper “I miss him too”
She rolled over and mumbled “my groom”
So I left to deal with my own pain that grew

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Harrison 18 August 2009

Hmm.....I'm sorry to say this is not one of my favorites. It seems to drag, then rush but I wanted to comment because I love the subject, stolen love from a fresh perspective. You're brilliant.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

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Fort Polk, Louisiana
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