Thursday, November 15, 2007

My Ode To Your Love Comments

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The sky never appears big
When you leave my love behind my back
You rest drowned as ever in your empty world
Your footsteps fumble in all corners
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Kamaru Zzaman
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Patrick McFarland 15 November 2007

Great imagery and use of language. Moving.

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