Sunday, June 6, 2010

My Pet Demon Comments

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You may think my pet to be unlikeable
But really it isn’t too bad to own
It’s fed when i am fed at the table
And it's with me even when I’m alone
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Tony Edmondson
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Juan Guzman 02 June 2011

well it doesnt really seem like a poem to me, but im no proffessor, it does ryhm but thats not the only thing in poems you need to put soul, you shouldnt put something becuase it rhyms but becuase it feels right it also seems like you wanted this poem to be longer, well thats just my opinoin.

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