Monday, April 24, 2006

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I lay here waiting, for what I am unsure,
I can't think straight or find the answer pure,
My mind races, my legs twitch,
I find myself lying in a ditch,
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Dave (Dave C) Cvetkovic
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Charles Chaim Wax 24 April 2006

a grand narrative clearly describing the need to find a spot to stand a spot to know at last the True Self a fine poem

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