Thursday, July 14, 2011

My Place In Time Comments

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Within the rocky pattern
Of her breast I was made
And like a legend’s emblem I became,
Trailing into the days fleeting like cars,
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Job Laz
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Tai Chi Italy 14 July 2011

Another brilliant poem JL! I was wondering about the question marks in the last piece I read and find myself wondering again in this poem? The line preceeding the? does not feel like a question, but I suspect it could do Which now pilots their sigh? Mmmmmm food for deep thought. It seems that 'she', be her 'Mother Nature, or mother by nature, has done a good job in giving you the tools to stand firmly in your place in time. Smiling at you Tai

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