My Place With Eden (Part One) Poem by Empath In flames

My Place With Eden (Part One)

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There is a girl,
She's standing there all alone.
My opportunity is there and yet I can't move.
I can't speak...

darkness penetrates my body to freeze.
Why can't I approach this woman?
Does she have a force field surrounding her?
Does the light shine from her so brightly I can not see where to go?

Like a soul trying to reach heaven
and yet blinded by the insignificant
light that surrounds it's path to Eden?
Is She my Eden? ? ?

Mother of Life, sweet embrace
Does my child heath from
thy Golden breast of purity,
Nurtured by Wisdom
and captured with Love.

Is she a shear,
none other by the flowers that bloom.
Or a single petal that is relinquished
by beauty that needs to hide
form the world from it's hatred.
To hide from me…..
Am I Hate?

Is this why it's so hard?
I See her as a Woman,
but like every other girl.
Shallowed by greed and money.
Comes a side willing to

Understand you…..
To love you……

Thursday, February 7, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 07 February 2008

An interesting series Empath, it certainly helps having some, without it, we are all lost. She sounds like a woman to die for....but don't please. Smiling at you, tai

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