Monday, March 22, 2010

My Quiet Time Comments

Rating: ★2.5

I go to the swamp every night,
The stars shine really bright.
I take the same trail every time,
Frogs just go hopping by.
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jasmine Johnson
fish shine fireflies
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Gerald Sedillo 22 March 2010

Yarg the AABB rhyme scheme; consider breaking from the norm. The redeeming quality of your poem is the quality of the images present.

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