Wednesday, August 9, 2017

My School Comments

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The place where I used to stay,
I used to learn and eat and play,
My so many friends and toys
The shared sorrows and joys
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Shilpa Chaganti
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Gajanan Mishra 09 August 2017

care, love, courage, fight- all life

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Shilpa Chaganti 17 August 2017

I am extremely pleased that found a very deep meaning into my childish attempt.. :)

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Nidhi Agrawal 09 August 2017

Your initial attempt at writing is a very good one. A nice poem with a nostalgic theme.

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Shilpa Chaganti 10 August 2017

Thanks Nidhi.. :) Glad you like this one..

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