My Shadow Comments

Very Nice, Shadow personified and the agony of someone dear leaving you is well maintained. I feel it carries a positive hope though in the last few lines.

Great piece. I can feel your sorrow and (maybe) disappointment. But you gotta thank your 'friend', though.. Coz, coz of him/her, you were able to write this wonderful piece.

Wow excellent poem. I love how much emotion you show for the shadow...clearly a poem painted of beauty. I'm honored to read a piece like this Take Care, Tyease