Raymond Valadez

Rookie (12-21-1982 / Mexico)

My Shooting Star - Poem by Raymond Valadez

one day i caught a shooting star, and held it in my hand for only a while.
then world came it took her away from me. but her beauty now i have carved into my eyes
because what shines brighter then a shooting star at night?

some day, some day
when i fade
i will loose last my memories of when i played
and dreamed with her in those very few days

but...

yes one day i caught a shooting star
i no longer cary her in my hands, i hold her now in my heart


Comments about My Shooting Star by Raymond Valadez

  • (5/4/2010 4:24:00 PM)


    short but very nice...... :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 4, 2010



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