My Star Poem by Vampire Doll

My Star

Rating: 4.5


The darkness I embrace
For there is nothing else to do.

A star, my star has crashed down
Into a peaceful lake of memories,
Into the cold land.

Her name no men will ever know-
Her beauty is now dust.
How did she deserve such pain?
Why did she past away?

Though answers won't come on angel wings
Nor they will ever speak her name;
My star is fallen in the deepest corner
Of my soul.

And there she remaines to stay,
For etirnety.
Till the Last day.

Tuesday, August 8, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: answers,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Bowman 29 November 2006

I really like it.... Roger

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Pia Andersson 13 August 2006

Stars rise you know...a beautiful, dark and very sad poem from you Thank you -Pia

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