My Sweet Heart Breaker! Poem by Sushma V A

My Sweet Heart Breaker!



I remember, it was a Monday morning...
Mist all around...I heard my heart ring! !
And Then...u came from nowhere...flashing a smile..
It suddenly turned sunny..i don't know how! but..in a while..

You...it was..who made me build a castle of dreams...
You...who made me smile..drove away the awful screams...
You..who called me pretty, , sweet and sensitive...
Whispered into my ear..'without you...how can i live? '
Wen I'd given my heart to you...I'd never been happier...! !
But...u just dropped it down..and now..you're my heart breaker! !

I got to hear things I wanted to..and even more...
I loved it wen you came knocking thru my door...
And...every time you turned back to glance at me...
I felt so fine..much better than I cud ever be! !

And..we had fights...it was a war field of gruesome words! !
Your silence so hard..kept pricking me like swords..
But then we came back..just like out of a fairy tale...
This happened many times...yet..we kept walking in the same trail..
Because..when I'd given you my heart..I'd never been happier..
But..you just dropped it down and now you're my heart breaker! !

Why don't you remember..our little escapades from your mother...
About what people where speaking..we finally learnt not to bother!
The promise we had made..amidst the coldness of water...
Warmth of your hand...I'd thought would last forever! !

It's 12 at night...clouds breaking down like me...
But why this unexpected end..I still don't see..
You're gone..and I'll learn to live with it...
It'll take long..but I'll climb out of d pit...
When I'd placed my heart in your hands...I meant 'forever'..
But..I never knew...you'd only turn out to b a heart breaker! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 12 September 2013

An unusual charm prevails all over these lines as the recollections have no hypocritical dimensions and the thoughts intense have been copied down from your mind that houses sweet memories. Real reciprocal love has great days to come and soon there will be finer days ahead as every cloud has a silver lining.. Heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter and perhaps you have much more to write in future..

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