Wednesday, March 26, 2008

My Torn Heart Comments

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Day after day
Night after night
We love each other,
Yet we constantly fight.
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xx3 mikki
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

its not always the guy's fault but the poem is amazing speaks so much about u and he was a fool 2 do that 2 u! u deserve better! u amazing beauty seen in this poem and in you thx - mel

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Ershad Mazumder 09 October 2008

Theme is good.But I felt it like a letter writing.Its not poetic.Poetry is not essay or narration. Poetry is always covered with shroud.Its not open or undressed.Thanks for sharing your feelings.

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