My Unparalled Feelings For You... Poem by Derrick Andrews

My Unparalled Feelings For You...

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This feeling, this emotion, it controls my soul,

When I hold you close to me, it's as if I'm whole,

The amount of people, always seems to disappear,

When I hold you tightly, and whenever you're near,

It's as if only you and I remain, in a sea of our love,

The passion rains down furiously, from the heavens above,

Your beautiful smile, on your soft, gorgeous face,

The rage of my heart, on the instant of our embrace,

It's as if God himself told me that you were the one,

You light my path throughout life, like a delicate sun,

Except when I look directly at you, my eyes do not squint,

They just soak in your love, and absorb every suddle hint,

Every detail that tells me that you feel the same way,

And that tells me you won't leave me, that you're here to stay,

My love for you burns like an unstoppable fire,

And turns into a need, a distinct desire,

Your love makes me invincible, from my head to my feet,

And it's for you and only you, that my heart steadily beats,

I feel as if I need your love to survive,

For whenever I'm near you, I feel so alive,

So full of happiness, joy, it's so hard to explain,

But I feel like when I'm with you, I can feel no pain,

Like I can stop a bullet, with the palm of my hand,

It's funny how we turned out this way, though it wasn't at all planned,

You're just so perfect, in the eyes of this poet,

And you wouldn't need to tell me you love me, I already know it,

I need you to breath, your love's essential to my heart,

Without you I'd cease to exist, I couldn't bear to be apart,

And when I tell you I love you, take it for what it is,

Because you don't know how hard explaining my love for you is,

It's such a new feeling, the likes of which I have never seen,

I feel as if we're in a movie, in a never ending love scene,

This feeling is so strong,

And I need for it to last long,

I've never felt anything like it, throughout all of my life,

And if I could at this moment, I'd make you my wife...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalay Allan 29 January 2009

This is full of love. I was so moved. It brought some droplets of tears in my eyes. Beautiful poem. I won't mind reading it a hundred times especially if this was written for me. Thanks for sharing.

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