Sunday, June 15, 2008

My Unspoken Fear Comments

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The funny thing is, everyones got the unspoken fear
It hides behind clouds yet it appears so clear
It's been hidden so long that it hurts to think
The walls begin to shrink and your minds on the brink
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Viola Grey 15 June 2008

they say facing your fears helps to conquer them...but you can't control your dreams...great poem

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M.A. C. 15 June 2008

Great poem....i love it and the ryhme scheme is so good....keep writing.... - S K ii T T L E Z

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Tai Chi Italy 15 June 2008

Put the gun somewhere further from your bed, is my first thought. Great poem those niggling fears brought into nightmarish vision in your poem. Guns are bad news, is a final thought. Smiling at you, Tai

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