Monday, September 22, 2008

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I dont know what you wish when u look at a watch
But yesterday i wished death between tic & tac

I dont know what u dream when u look at sea
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negar shahnouri
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Ershad Mazumder 21 October 2008

Very good piece dear. Keep on posting.

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

You write poems and try your best to make it all go away. The more you write the more the hurt fades. WEll done, nice flow.

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