Mystery Of A Commoner Poem by Larika Shakyawar

Mystery Of A Commoner

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Commoner is sitting in the corner
Quiet and silent
Girl who is mysterious
Obsessed in her own world
Mystery of her life
Does she solve out?
Neither she wanna in
Nor she could walk out
With the waves of memory lane
Wanna go up n down
By spreading her hidden feathers
Wanna fly sky high
Sky of her longings and dreams
Wanna live her paradise.

Thursday, March 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2017

Obsessed in her own world Mystery of her life....hidden feathers. longings of dreams of paradise....... desire, wishes, aspirations, , , , of life....... all are expressed well in this poem dear poetess. thank u very much. tony

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2016

sky of longings and dreams..

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Larika Shakyawar

Larika Shakyawar

Rajgarh M.P., India
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