Pond Of Water Poem by Larika Shakyawar

Pond Of Water

Rating: 5.0


Deep pond of water
A mile distance away from
Where I stand near my cab
I m fond of its charm
Repeatedly touch my feet
Those naughty, magical waves
Sensationalise from down to up
That signals touch my soul
How far I m from it
How long I have not gone
I could enjoy and feel
Coldness and water's charm
That single pond of water
I believed to bring good luck
Those sound of streams
Used to recite the blessing songs
Songs Still echo my ears
With those memories I never fed up
Like the source of Felicity
The deep pond of water waves
The deep pond of pleasure.

Pond Of Water
Saturday, April 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: pleasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 20 July 2017

Enjoyed reading the poem. There seems to be an unbridled yearning for a divine bliss, peace and pleasure in life.Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of poetry. I quote: How far I m from it / How long I have not gone I could enjoy and feel / Coldness and water's charm The deep pond of water waves / The deep pond of pleasure.

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Larika Shakyawar 29 July 2017

Thank you so much Rajnish sir

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Christopher Tye 07 May 2017

Wonderful poem it reminds me about the pond my grandfather had in his garden with beautiful fish and a wooden bridge that I used to watch them from.

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Larika Shakyawar 07 May 2017

Ohhh sir, I m glad to know that my poem reminds you about your grandfather​ had in his garden... Thank you very much sir

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Kishore Kumar Das 16 May 2016

What a resplendent poem, Larika........people may undermine the pond.....but it can be considered as a nice food for poetry......10 marks to you..

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Larika Shakyawar 16 May 2016

Yes sir I agree with you and thank u

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 April 2016

Beautifully conceived equally beautiful song and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Larika Shakyawar 09 April 2016

Thank you sir, Ratnakar Mandlik ji

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Larika Shakyawar

Larika Shakyawar

Rajgarh M.P., India
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