Deep pond of water
A mile distance away from
Where I stand near my cab
I m fond of its charm
Repeatedly touch my feet
Those naughty, magical waves
Sensationalise from down to up
That signals touch my soul
How far I m from it
How long I have not gone
I could enjoy and feel
Coldness and water's charm
That single pond of water
I believed to bring good luck
Those sound of streams
Used to recite the blessing songs
Songs Still echo my ears
With those memories I never fed up
Like the source of Felicity
The deep pond of water waves
The deep pond of pleasure.
Wonderful poem it reminds me about the pond my grandfather had in his garden with beautiful fish and a wooden bridge that I used to watch them from.
Ohhh sir, I m glad to know that my poem reminds you about your grandfather had in his garden... Thank you very much sir
What a resplendent poem, Larika........people may undermine the pond.....but it can be considered as a nice food for poetry......10 marks to you..
Beautifully conceived equally beautiful song and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Enjoyed reading the poem. There seems to be an unbridled yearning for a divine bliss, peace and pleasure in life.Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of poetry. I quote: How far I m from it / How long I have not gone I could enjoy and feel / Coldness and water's charm The deep pond of water waves / The deep pond of pleasure.
Thank you so much Rajnish sir