Thursday, September 29, 2022

Naked Arms Comments

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naked arms

they may be hungry
but they are not cold
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Bri Edwards 17 October 2022

I like the last two lines especially, for the alliteration and rhyme in the first line. Cheers. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2022

Welcome to PH, though, from the biography, I suspect the author will not be reading my comment. bri ;)

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