Naked Covers Poem by Ovidd

Naked Covers

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Love's rejoice
under naked covers
enjoyed within the other
to love another
with vagrant liberty
that glorious blindness
seduction its wisdom
that immortal form
consumed within the moment
of a single glance

her eye
a fire of her hunger
kindled
roused and
contrived within my heart
and flung
with swollen syllables
of Love's want

lifting one by one
they as raptured souls
drifting far
to part a way
of tongue
and thought
controlled by the eye
that hides the sun
and all it hides
when all is done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 04 October 2011

Deep stuff, love's in the air, it frees from within and without, 'to love anotherwith vagrant liberty that glorious blindness...', .... There is a powerful passion, 'her eye a fire of her hunger kindled roused and contrived within my heart and flung with swollen syllables of Love's want'.... Very good.... Of course there's more but, lol, I'll stop there....

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