Xillus Xavier

Rookie - 1 Points (June 13th,1978 / Arab, Alabama)

Needing A Lift - Poem by Xillus Xavier

*** This is a cinquain: syllable form of 2-4-6-8-2 ***


Walking,
right arm outstretched,
thumb pointing to the sky,
the man in the rain watches cars
speed by.


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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (10/7/2008 9:24:00 AM)

    Take it from a poetry teacher: very good job.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 6, 2008



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