Needing A Lift Poem by Xillus Xavier

Needing A Lift

Rating: 5.0


*** This is a cinquain: syllable form of 2-4-6-8-2 ***


Walking,
right arm outstretched,
thumb pointing to the sky,
the man in the rain watches cars
speed by.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 07 October 2008

Take it from a poetry teacher: very good job. Adeline

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