Explore Poems GO!

Neutral Tones

Rating: 3.4

WE stood by a pond that winter day,
And the sun was white, as though chidden of God,
And a few leaves lay on the starving sod,
--They had fallen from an ash, and were gray.

Your eyes on me were as eyes that rove
Over tedious riddles solved years ago;
And some words played between us to and fro--
On which lost the more by our love.

The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing
Read More

READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Coleman 03 August 2010

Neutral Tones encapsulates my feelings of a dying (dead?) relationship. My god this is a beautiful poem!

5 3 Reply
big man 30 January 2019

you are a virgin you neckbeard furry lover leave this site and find a wife you nonce

0 0 Reply
raven 01 May 2018

Please write this a bit better.

1 1 Reply
Ethan Salter 01 May 2018

this is a very interesting poem, the entire dying relationship is handled well here

0 1 Reply
vageenslayer69420blazeit 30 January 2019

anyone wanna play fortnite while touching yourself

0 1 Reply
xxxtentacion 30 January 2019

my wife left me and took the kids. i cant see them on christmas

0 0 Reply
cuntslayer69 30 January 2019

eeeey yo fam wanna buy some vbucks yeah 69% percent off

0 0 Reply
Morgzs mum 30 January 2019

Just facking kill yourself son

1 0 Reply
Sam Roberts 01 May 2018

This poem could be written better but I enjoyed reading this

0 1 Reply