New Sneakers Poem by yada yada yada

New Sneakers

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When you are a child, you need help crossing the street.
And when you grow older, you, again, need help crossing the street.
Why do we revert to the way that we were?
Is it by choice? Or did we stop making our own decisions a while back?

Friday, August 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 11 August 2017

Good write indeed. But something seems to have gone missing. It is not a question of choice otherwise you could have included the phase of young age also. It is the level of a man's physical fitness and reflexes which necessitate any help or support while crossing the road. Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 August 2017

stop maki9ng decision, good, truth is here.

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of olds and golds. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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