Thursday, August 28, 2008

Night Time Comments

Rating: 4.7

the night is cold
the night is sad for some
the night is so dark
the night come and go like my love for you
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Bradley Stewart
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Pablo Obama 20 July 2013

because is...beuase...everwhere...there is this thing called spell check, you should use it :)

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Emily Price 27 August 2009

hi liked your poem its good

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Jay Lawson 09 December 2008

Hi i think this poem is great and i can esily relate!

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Jacqui Deutsch 06 December 2008

hey keep up the good work but i would suggest going over your work and re-reading it because you repeated a little bit but i still like it

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