Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Ninety Comments

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If I live to be ninety, I wonder what will be.
Will I look in the mirror and still see me?
Will I even remember who I used to be?
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Rachael Loudon
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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

This being your first poem in this forum, I take the privilege to welcome you cordially to PH.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

A nice theme to write about. Very well written. When I breath my last breath, I will finally get to see, Something that only happens once, but lasts for eternity. The fear is contagious! A great emotion so well articulated!

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