Tuesday, February 26, 2013

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When lost in the dark you can't find your way,
No more I can walk with you but will be the moon of a full moon day.
When stuck in a storm you can't see,
No more I can hold your hand but will be the dimly lightened lee.
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Kritika Yadav
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Kritika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Payal Parande 26 February 2013

well expressed, the words shows intense pain and love.well done thank you for sharing

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Kritika Yadav 06 January 2016

thank u so much Payal: -)

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Kritika Yadav

Kritika Yadav

Korba, India
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