No More Luck Poem by ARM 007

No More Luck



I had tried as much as I could,
But it didn't work out enough good.
I gave up all that I had
But I realized that I had been all mad.

To be giving up for those who just ignored me;
How much they deceived me now I see.
I gave up all for only those;
But that was what I chose.

I've given up,
To think about the past.
No more luck
As this time passes fast.

It was fast that I chose this,
But they just used me as a paper and tore,
Now I won't take this any more.
Cause with anger now I'm going to roar!

I've lost all rights and freedom now,
And all these gave me a severe blow,
That nowadays I feel to low,
But it was the results of the seeds I sow.

I have lost my freedom,
And curse myself for that very reason.
But from this truth I can't run
That if I had my luck, I would have definitely won.

Cause everyone's got what they want;
This very thought, comes and haunts
Me everyday, If I only had,
My luck, I wouldn't have been this sad.

I've given up,
To think about the past.
No more luck
That would ever last.

I'm going to change,
All that I've done;
And all, without my luck
I'll try and have some fun.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The time when you remember all the awful things you've been through, and finally learn from it that it is better to forget the past and enjoy the present.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Smith 25 October 2012

I like this poem allot. I can relate to it, and I can feel the emotions through the lines. Very well done :)

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