No More Sun Poem by Brianna Wilshusen

No More Sun



Moon light will shine,
The guns will sing.
No creatures alive,
But I will survive.
They hurt me in ways,
That you would not know.
Sun will cease shining,
The moon will kill all
Vampires unite,
Lets eat human flesh.
Humans have killed us,
In return they shall die.
For we are the Gods,
And us they do serve.
Never again,
Will the sun shine.
Always in darkness,
One day we will rule.
Soon this day will arrive,
With no human remains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Javier Falcon 18 September 2008

I really like this, there are a few words you could of used to make it smoother, but great... I think you should continue writing, this is quite good... Awesome write... Sincerely, Jay Falcon USA

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