No.Not At All Poem by Sumita Jetley

No.Not At All

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i never felt a tinge or hurt
when we two decide mutually

there is nothing much for us
together or solitary

i let the wave crash on the tide itself
me and you

still in sight

Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: revival
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
so much comfort, the distant
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2017

i let the wave crash on the tide itself me and you still in sight - -mutual decision, tinge hurt....... in simple lines you convey a lot of emotion.... thank you dear poetess. it is a rare ability. tony

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