No.Not At All Poem by Sumita Jetley

No.Not At All

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i never felt a tinge or hurt
when we two decide mutually

there is nothing much for us
together or solitary

i let the wave crash on the tide itself
me and you

still in sight

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
so much comfort, the distant
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2017

i let the wave crash on the tide itself me and you still in sight - -mutual decision, tinge hurt....... in simple lines you convey a lot of emotion.... thank you dear poetess. it is a rare ability. tony

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