Wednesday, November 16, 2005

No Where To Run, No Where To Hide Comments

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Fire blared around me
The flames whipping my skin
No where to run
No where to hide
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Natalie Clyne
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Miranda Coffey 27 November 2005

Strong images and an even stronger presentation of them. The way you wrote it allows the reader to experience the emotions within it as well. Good job. ~miranda

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Linda Jenkinson 16 November 2005

i was drawn to the flames...good read!

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Lylyanna Pilewski 16 November 2005

wow super strong last line, I like it awesomely done. Lylyanna

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Natalie Clyne

Natalie Clyne

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